
For the most part, I enjoyed the paper, which is surprising given the amount of analytical and physical chemistry within. To say the least, they are far from my favorite subjects (even though I'm taking both this semester...). It also led me to discover the MCM; the Master Chemical Mechanism, which I spent some time browsing and was pretty impressed with.
I have a few criticisms here, the first of which being they're trying to write a novel. Here's what I mean:
p. 193: "The most important of these intermediates is the hydroxyl radical (OH), which is generated mostly in the daytime as a result of ozone photolysis to form electronically excited oxygen atoms, O(1D), which react rapidly with water vapor to form OH."
p. 210: "The main contributor to OH initiation in both summer and winter is the reaction between O3 and alkenes." ... "The fraction of OH initiation from O3 + alkenes is approximately double that from the O(1D) + H2O reaction in the summer, but 100 times greater in the winter.
p. 212: "The largest source of OH by far is the reaction of HO2 + NO, and thus OH levels reflect the rate of carbonyl photolysis, which occurs at longer wavelengths and thus is still significant in winter."
They're trying to guide us through the path in which they discovered things (I think), but it doesn't seem appropriate in the way they are writing things. My other criticism is that they talk about global warming without mentioning it's a theory. I know some people think that it has progressed beyond being a theory, but they should really be more objective in the scientific literature.
Edit:
Following up Martin's comment, I feel like I should clarify some things. I went through and reread what I have written on this issue, and gave it some thought. Criticizing the article for not referring to global warming is a theory seems rather silly now that I think about it, even though evolution (since it's the example that was used) is a theory, it's not really necessary to refer to as such. As for my personal views on global warming - I stand by that I'm not sold 100% one way or the other, however it's not the fact of whether it's happening that I question, rather the degree to which it's happening. I'm just arguing that people often exaggerate how fast this is taking place.
Heard, D.E. (2006). ATMOSPHERIC FIELD MEASUREMENTS OF THE HYDROXYL RADICAL USING LASER-INDUCED FLUORESCENCE SPECTROSCOPY. Annual Review of Physical Chemistry, 57(1), 191-216. DOI: 10.1146/annurev.physchem.57.032905.104516
Btw, I dislike DOIs that are this long.
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#2: by will on 03/19/08 @ 11:40PM EST
Martin:
Thanks for taking the time to comment. Very valid points; I went back and added an extra paragraph to the article in response.
Martin:
Thanks for taking the time to comment. Very valid points; I went back and added an extra paragraph to the article in response.
#3: by Brian on 03/20/08 @ 10:44AM EST
" I'm just arguing that people often exaggerate how fast this is taking place."
Who's exaggerating the rate, and why? Is it that you disagree with methodologies or analyses that address rates of change?
I'm not talking about media, blogs, or people on the street ... i'm talking about in the literature (as you allude to) ... why are the rates being exaggerated?
" I'm just arguing that people often exaggerate how fast this is taking place."
Who's exaggerating the rate, and why? Is it that you disagree with methodologies or analyses that address rates of change?
I'm not talking about media, blogs, or people on the street ... i'm talking about in the literature (as you allude to) ... why are the rates being exaggerated?
#4: by will on 03/20/08 @ 11:29AM EST
Hmm... this is becoming painfully obvious to me that I should have put some more work into this before writing it.
Brian:
Yeah, I seem to be putting my criticism in the wrong place - that criticism shouldn't be directed toward the literature, more towards... everywhere else.
This article interested me a lot, I was just annoyed by the way they tried to guide us to the source of the OH radical. I wanted to criticize that, which unfortunately lead to me bringing up this second point that I probably would have been better off leaving out.
Hmm... this is becoming painfully obvious to me that I should have put some more work into this before writing it.
Brian:
Yeah, I seem to be putting my criticism in the wrong place - that criticism shouldn't be directed toward the literature, more towards... everywhere else.
This article interested me a lot, I was just annoyed by the way they tried to guide us to the source of the OH radical. I wanted to criticize that, which unfortunately lead to me bringing up this second point that I probably would have been better off leaving out.



















Two points:
1) You seem to misunderstand the term "theory", as used in science. See a good discussion here: http://www.geocities.com/CapeCanaveral/Hangar/2437/theory.htm
2) Unless some drastic new evidence comes to light, the scientific debate over the issue is over. That’s why scientists treat it as accepted theory, just as biology papers assume evolution is an accepted theory.